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"H-Hey, Hong Kong? H-Hey, uh..." You struggle to say, leaning lightly on your left side. You had finally mastered enough courage to speak with him, your long time crush, Hong Kong. You had been secretly in-love with the laid-back nation for quite some time now. It started back when you first met him, along with his family, at one of the World meetings. Your country's business marketing wasn't doing well, so you needed help badly. You knew of China's great success in that field, so of course you went to him.

He didn't mind helping, as long as he got some of the profit. You did not complain, seeing how much you were in need of help. Then, two boys, seemingly coming out of nowhere, caught your attention when they, well just the one with an odd hair curl, started talking to China. The one with the curl was saying something about how marketing was all started, and made, in Korea. Which caused China's facial expression to turn irritated. While China scolded the boy about being rude for interrupting his conversation, you were too busy staring at another.

He was just standing there, no smile, frown, anything. To you, he seemed bored. You tried making small talk, but he only nodded yes or no as answers. When you mentioned 4rth of July coming, specifically the fireworks, did you see his eyes spark with slight interest. You used that to your advantage, and were finally able to hear his voice. He had only said '"They are lovely"', but it was a start. You melted, yes corny, in his voice.

Few months had past since then. Your country was doing amazingly better, but you still visited the Asian nations. South Korea took a liking to you, or your chest, and had been knocked out many times by either you or China. China was a nice friend, while Taiwan became your newest best friend. You weren't sure what Hong Kong considered you as though, he never really talked much. Even so, you felt different around him. His calm personality pulled you into a peaceful trance, and those eyes...You could feel your cheeks redden.

You spent, as much as you could, time with him. And sometimes, managed making small talk. He didn't make many facial expression, a few curious looks here and there, not a lot. But once, when you said how much fun you had with him after the 4rth of July party America had to celebrate his birthday, did you noticed a little smile playing at his lips when staring at you. At least, better known as hoped, you thought he smiled at you.

So now, here you are, trying your best to gain his attention away from the book he's reading. Right now, only you and him were alone in China's house. China ran out of some things, so he needed to go out for a few hours. Taiwan threw you a sly look, that made your cheeks light up brightly, when she offered to go as well, ending up dragging South Korea along because he wanted to stay and watch his favorite drama. She knew how you felt about Hong Kong. This was just her way of helping you out, and for her own fun because she also knew how shy you were around him.

After tapping his shoulder, did he finally look up at you. You gulped, those eyes of his...


That voice...

"I, um...wanted to know if, maybe, you'd like to....Y-You know, uh, do s-something together...? I-I mean nothing out of the ordinary! J-Just spend t-time with each other, s-since we never talk much...Y-you don't have to, though! I just wanted to-" He cut you off by placing his index finger onto your lips. You felt your face heating quickly at this sudden touch, and hoped you wouldn't faint from happiness.

"You speak too much, and your words tend to stutter. Also, your face is red." He cupped both of your cheeks, which now put the saying 'tomato red' to shame. Even more-so when he started rubbing his cheek against yours.

"Your face feels heated. Like a firecracker." He mumbles unemotionally, moving his face up and down as if he thought your cheek would start sparking like sparklers. By now, your heart might just do so. Because you felt it beating so fast, it might just explode. You try breathing normally, but that's becoming quite hard when he suddenly pulls back, only so he could stare you straight in the eyes.

"Your eyes look like Roman Candles. So bright, with many colorful emotions swirling around." Again, no emotion was in his voice. To anyone else, he may have sounded bored. But to your ears, you thought you heard a slight something. His voice almost seemed softer.

"W-W-What? Wow...I don't think I've ever heard you t-talk this much before....Y-you should do it more often! I-I really like hearing your voice! It's so...tranquil. Like the aftermath of firework sparks.....I-I didn't mean i-in a bad way! You know t-that calm feeling you get by j-just looking at them? Um, does that make sense? Uh...I-I mean-" Your speech was once again quietened down by Hong Kong, but this time...It was his lips pressing calmly onto yours.

"You were doing it again." Was it your dazed mind or did his voice have an emotion to it? Something soft, warm...loving? If this is a dream, please let this blissful slumber continue eternally. But there is no-way he just said anything emotionally, let alone lovingly.

"Sorry..." Was your only reply. You're lucky even that came out from your dry mouth, because you didn't feel anything else could be said from it. Your heart did a back-flip up to your throat when he leaned his head onto your chest. You couldn't breathe or even move an inch of your body when his arms wrapped around your waist as he pressed further into you.

"H-Hong K-Kong...?" You squeaked out softly, wrapping your arms around his head, placing your hands into his hair. The scene looked like one from those cheesy romantic movies, and yet if someone saw, they'd surely go 'awww'. Your mind was spinning from being held in such a way. You never would have imagined, maybe daydreamed, that he'd do this kind of thing. It felt...well, words can't really describe. But you'll go with warm.

"Your heart is loud, like a firecracker. That isn't normal."

"Are you saying I'm a firecracker....B-Because you keep comparing me to one..."

"Is that bad? Fireworks are very beautiful, like yourself. You shouldn't complain. Besides, I love fireworks."

"Then...May I be a firecracker for y-you?"

"You already were."

You lifted his head with both hands, smiling shyly. Mentally giving yourself a prep talk, you pressed your lips to his. He softly returned the kiss, his hold on you tightening somewhat when you shyly licked his bottom lip for entrance. He allowed, letting your tongue slowly enter his sweetness. You kissed him timidly, while he was more calm. Gently caressing your tongue with his.

When you both pulled apart, you were breathing slow breaths in order to stay on your two feet. If he wasn't holding you right now, you might have just fell from feeling weak in the knees. Yes, you think, that sounds cheesy. But damn, this cheese tasted good.

"Wow...who knew I wouldn't mind being considered a firecracker, let alone love the person calling me it..." You say, blushing immensely. He leaned his forehead against yours, the same unemotional look gazing back at you. That is, until...

He smiled.

Extended ending.

"HEY, HONG KONG!!! (Name's) breast are mine! Why are you hugging her!" Gotta love the family.

Request from :iconpastanotwar:

Picture not mine!

Was listening to this when writing. [link]

Okay, so after writing two horror stories, I had to get my fluff on! I don't know much about Hong Kong, only that he's not very emotional and says things without a care in the world.

Also, he has a thing for fireworks. I really love this guy! He knows how to make sparkles sexy! :iconhongkongsparklesplz:

I have a headache... I guess rocking out to Vocaloid songs, earphones in, full volume, singing into a hairbrush, dancing like an idiot, does that to you... :iconsweatdropplz:

Hetalia Hidekaz Himaruya

Firecracker/You Hong Kong

Your vital regions, still being fought over by Hong Kong and Prussia.

:iconprussiaplz: :iconhongkongplz:
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DeaththeKidOCD Featured By Owner 4 days ago  New Deviant
omg, the last part of the description is 10x worse cause i read "Where do babies come from awesome parents" and now i cant get the picture of readerxprussia's kid scarred for life out of my head. oh dear.
Inedible-Sashimii Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Oh.. South korea ....*facepalmed*
marshmallownyancat Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2014
FALCON PUNCH!!!!!!!!!!!!
Falcon punch :fishslap: :shutup: 
hellokittyasdf Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014
Love the story
JuRom Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*sights* Sometimes I want to kill South Korea (okay better I shouldn't xD I like him better than HK)
kandalover13 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014
Jeez south Korea
BouncingBunnyXD Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014
I couldn't stop singing Circus, that title...
Rocking out and dancing like an idiot is half of the experience for volcaloid tho!!! No self song rendition is complete without a hairbrush!!! :33
NatureTune Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Student General Artist
I ->+fav`ed it. Because i want to read it many times again!:squee: 
ThatHetaliaFreak9 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I half expected HK to start dancing...

"BABY YOU'RE A FIREWORK! CONE ON SHOW THEM WHAT YOU'RE WORTH! MAKE EM GO *Hips thrust in time with noise* UGH UGH UGH! AS YOU SHOOT ACROSS THE SKYYYYYYY" (He would have to be drunk to do that...)
minecraftpersonSky Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014
Tomoya Okazaki (Laughing Hard) [V1]  Dignity Laugh  Best comment ever!!!! Oh my gosh! My side hurst from laughing too much!!!!!Romano (Mustache Laughs) [V1] [Icon] Otoya Ittoki 
ThatHetaliaFreak9 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Why thanks~~~~
Llama Emoji-02 (Blush) [V1] 
polkadotnot Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014
O mah gosh Your comment just Llama Emoji-01 (Laughing) [V1]  I was drinking pop (soda) when i read this and then, just opened my mouth until the soda was gone, and then coughed up a kidney laughing.
ThatHetaliaFreak9 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
DoruDesux1 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014
Kawaii! b-but who owns my chest? :C except me  XD
Daimonddiva99 Featured By Owner May 1, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Hong kong owns your breasts now
DoruDesux1 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2016
Daimonddiva99 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Just casually blushing in a corner WHILE silently fangirling
Kekebel Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013
So..In Hetalia....Fireworks=Kissing=Cheese?

Also, I'm stupid.
Yukibow Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
SilentGirl888 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
*reads title* Mwuhahahaha… If I'm a firework, I won't go off when someone wants me to so when they check, I can blow up in their face! 
MsPrussiaLover Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist
Kekebel Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013
Wow. Derpy Reader-chan is derpy.
DoitsuIWANTPASTA Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
DarkDiamond81 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I always thought Kristen Stewart and Hong Kong were sister and brother.
aoikuniedaxyuukanda Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2015
LOL! Your comment made my day XD
NightmareViolinist Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013
Dude I love your icon and OMG I love the story!!!! :D :D
Katarenna Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Gotta love dat ending...:iconfalconpunchplz:
He got owned :iconoldschoolownedplz:
silverxblaze13 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013
Dat extended ending :iconfalconpunchplz: :iconscaredkoreaplz:
Fangirl-of-Cuteness Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Dat ending. :icondatassplz:.
Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
Awwwwwwww so cute and adorable :iconadorableplz:
MisakiAyzawa Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
HikariXSaysXMeow Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012
oh my gosh. my fan girl-ness is exploding like fireworks
flyingbuttersock Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
whoa,:iconthatsshoopplz: you deserve a cookie :iconcookie5plz:
IcyIce360 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012
:iconitssofluffyplz: Ending is as awesome as Prussia~
Chenguang23 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012
...dhdahihfiadcbiYEGFWYBDHCBAHbsdbdhbvkhwbudvfhbdfhvjbzh *sighs* That was so adora-full~!
dumb-derper11 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
SakuMulti Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Loved the end!
XxblackblossomxX Featured By Owner May 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome in epic proportions
Manaka0211 Featured By Owner May 5, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
MaiSodenoShirayuki Featured By Owner May 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconloolfaceplz: Awesome story!
xXIvyBraginskixX Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012  Student Photographer
OMFG XD i love the ending.. FALCON PUNCH! :iconfalconpunchplz:
DementedlyMe Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
I never really fangirled Hong Kong. Until now. Good job!

FALCON PUNCH! :iconfalconpunchplz:
ShyGirl04320 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
PastaNotWar Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Dude this is BEAU-TI-FUL~! Ohmigosh, you are amazing!! Thank you so much!!! :squee:
Mew-Ayame Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm happy you liked it, thank you! And you're very welcome! :iconyayhongkongplz:
PastaNotWar Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No problem~! XD I look forward to reading more stories from you~ :3
HetaliaisAwesome17 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Prussia and Hong Kong have to share my vital regions. :meow:
shadowXtikalfan Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012
OH wow Korea.. You had to say that -//-;
SayaYAOIfan28 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Student
me: who got punched nyaa~???
my yami: i bet it was South Korea
flickawhite Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Hong Kong isn't one of my favourite characters but this was so good! Except when I punch people, I yell 'Surprise Abortion'.
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